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Re: More on the Hermetic Language

From:Paul Burgess <paul@...>
Date:Thursday, March 13, 2003, 14:47
3/12/03 8:50:26 AM, Jan van Steenbergen
<ijzeren_jan@...> wrote:

>Welcome, Paul!
Jan, thank you for your greetings, and for your very kind words!
>I've had a quick look at your website, and I agree with
all others that it
>really is a remarkable piece of work. Your language is
fascinating, and the
>script is extremely beautiful. Well, the whole thing
looks indeed very
>impressive. I'm just curious what the story is about.
And what the meaning is
>of all these chess problems near the end.
In "Mna Sipri Cilama" ("The Celestial Labors"), the evil and mighty king Thosolano lays three impossible labors upon the good but weak king Dhalathlo, as the condition for the return of Dhalathlo's queen, Thalsthilo, whom Thosolano has captured. In order to perform these labors, Dhalathlo travels on a great circular journey, to the end of the world, to the heavens, beyond the heavens, and even beyond life and death. He seeks the aid of the gods, and at each step along the way he must shed one more weapon or piece of armor, until he is without any means of offense or defense. Dhalathlo returns from his journey, no longer weak but now a mighty figure of numinous dread, weaponless, his hair turned white due to his own passage through death. He carries out the third labor-- "Fight me with a weapon of your own choice"-- by taking on Thosolano in a game of chess. (Actually, more like shatranj.) Hence the chess diagrams, which show the final moves of the game between Dhalathlo and Thosolano. This is actually the classic old "Dilaram problem" from the game of shatranj: black is about to put white in checkmate, but white (Dhalathlo) wins the game by sacrificing his most powerful pieces. From there, the story turns apocalyptic, as Dhalathlo's triumph over Thosolano becomes the cosmic triumph of the good moon-god Dhalbembu over the evil sun-god Rotas, ushering in the end of the world. I would love to provide an English translation of this story, but only time will tell! My work keeps me busy. I did make an English translation of the original Hermetic back ca. 1974, but I'm not satisfied with it, and would like to prepare a new English translation. However, even in English, the story would be so densely packed with unfamiliar concepts, that it would be well-nigh unintelligible without an accompanying commentary. Once again, thanks for your kind words! --------------------------------------------- E-mail paul@paulburgess.org Website http://www.paulburgess.org ---------------------------------------------