Re: The nature of birds and conlangs
From: | Christophe Grandsire <christophe.grandsire@...> |
Date: | Friday, June 25, 1999, 15:03 |
At 11:49 25/06/99 -0400, you wrote:
>On Thu, 24 Jun 1999, John Cowan wrote:
>
>> C: praises for night-sky in throat of lark
>> C: When the songbird glorifies the Even Star,
>> C: Songbird glorifies night star
>> C: "if" a bird of a song be a glorifier of the star of the night,
>&c.
>
>Well, here's my wrench in the works: One of the glosses for Kernu
>'uesvoers' was "Evenstar", others are "night sky" and (poetically) "The
>West" / "Heaven". "Night sky" was the "correct" word to choose.
>
>Nice, though, the way Christophe took lines without verbs and all,
>inserting appropriate forms.
>
It was indeed a difficult exercise, thank you Padraic :) . But I loved it,
and I found the result particularly beautiful and ambiguous, just like
Moten poetry is supposed to be (which gave Josh many problems to understand
my poem).
>Padraic.
>
>>
>> --
>> John Cowan
http://www.ccil.org/~cowan cowan@ccil.org
>> You tollerday donsk? N. You tolkatiff scowegian? Nn.
>> You spigotty anglease? Nnn. You phonio saxo? Nnnn.
>> Clear all so! 'Tis a Jute.... (Finnegans Wake 16.5)
>
>
Christophe Grandsire
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