From: | Joe Mondello <rugpretzel@...> |
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Date: | Monday, May 31, 1999, 1:56 |
I've sent the poem to Chris Peters. Other than having to introduce a verb into the first line and making the last line a passive expression, i think my translation with fairly close. The use of modal verbs, I fear, may alter Chris' interpretation of the poem. Then again, that may be interesting. pp Joe Mondello