Re: New Website! Chovur (with sound)

> Joseph Fatula writes:
>  > I've just posted a new website:
>  >
>  > http://timshak.tripod.com/lang/chovur.html
>  >
>  > It's a few lessons in Chovur, with sound samples for the first few
>  > sentences.  I intentionally refrain from using technical terms to any
large
>  > degree, as this is intended as something of a first primer in Chovur.
Tell
>  > me what you think.
>  >
>  > Joe Fatula
>  >
>
> It seems to me you could be a little more explicit as to word order
> and morphology in the early lessons.  Particularly draw attention to
> any substantial deviation from the English pattern.  Avoiding
> technical terminology is good, but they need to have the relevant
> features of the language explained to them.

What sorts of things would you recommend?  As I made up the language, it all
seems very easy to me, of course.  What sorts of things might cause trouble
for someone trying to learn a bit of it, and what can be done to make those
more obvious?  And also, is the rest of it easy to follow?