Re: My Artifacts Page

Trent Pehrson wrote at 2005-03-14 09:31:13 (-0500)
 > Learned List Members,
 >
 > On my conlang site (<http://idrani.perastar.com>), I recently finished
 > version 1.0.2 of the artifacts page.  I would like to invite a peer review
 > of that page only:
 >
 > <http://idrani.perastar.com/idrani/ISMS_artifacts.htm>
 >
 > My primary concerns are with basic clarity in the explanations and
 > with formal and functional operation of the page and, of course,
 > with any formal errors such as type-o's or misspellings.  The page
 > contains many very large images and may take some time to load.
 >
 > If you are inclined to review it, please send criticisms to my personal
 > email address:
 >
 > <pehr099@...>
 >
 > I may not be able to respond to every review, so I heartily thank
 > any kind participant in advance.
 >
 > Trent

Your artwork here is beautiful, particularly the calligraphy.  Truly
inspirational.

I suggest that you split the one page into a series.  Loading all
those images at once doesn't just take a long time, it takes up a lot
of memory.  My system suffered severe slowdown culminating in a
browsel crash - faster computers with more memory will have less of a
problem, but this isn't the slowest machine on the internet, either.

I didn't notice any errors or lack of clarity in the text.  It might
be an idea to include hyperlinks to other parts of the site when
relevant (descriptions of the scripts, for example).

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