Re: ANNOUNCE: Wikilret Website

--- In conlang@yahoogroups.com, scott <sjcaldwell@M...> wrote:
>Aza!  I have finally put together a website for my conlang wikilret.
>I'm pretty new at conlanging and would appreciate any comments,
>questions, or criticism (especially as it relates to the terminology
>I use, or have left out).
>So far I have posted the phonology, grammar, and a list of numbers.
>I hope to add more, and start posting my conworld stuff.
>You can find it at http://homepage.mac.com/sjcaldwell/Wikilret/
scott
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Very well done, Scott.  I especially like the legibility.  Good color
contrast for these old eyes and the manner of marking headings, etc.,
is good.

May I make three comments?

Under Word Order: You state that interrogative sentences are SOV, but
one of your examples is "Ham you like?"  I see this as meaning "Does
ham like you?"  Should it not be "You ham like?"

Under Noun: You use the words "intelligent" and "sentient."  It seems
as though you equate the two.

Under pronouns: There is no A in independent.

Charlie
http://wiki,frath.net/user:caeruleancentaur

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