Correction (Of: Re: (FW) Re: Conlang T-shirt)

I wrote:
>>>>>>
Name-   Meina'nuagha'
Author- Paul Bennett
Phrase- Eiz sie an  ligna'en sieceshau eir    oa  lu'ocaneighi
Inter-  VOL you ERG language you.of    COPULA ABS here.illative
Script- Roman script - apstrophe = acute on previous vowel
<<<<<<

On further reflection, I'd advise:
Eiz  mei  an   lu'ocaneighic   phoala'm  oa   ligna'en  sieceshau
VOL  me   ERG  here.illative   want.me   ABS  language  you.of

I had some confusion about Direct and Indirect Objects (these baffle me enough
in English sometimes <G>) and how to translate these into Primary and Secondary
Objects, and then into Ergative/Absolute.  I'm a REAL beginner at both of those
concepts (PO/SO and E/A).  Also, I've made "here.illative" into a noun rather
than an adjective, to make it fit into the sentence better.



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