Re: words from Su Cheng Zhong

 --- John Cowan <jcowan@...> wrote: >
Peter Clark scripsit:
>
> >         Like that weed in the rose garden that
> just won't go away,  [...]
>
> Umm, you do know that that scans?
>
> Like that WEED in the ROSE garden that JUST won't go
> aWAY,
> like that RING in the TUB that you CAN't scrub aWAY,
> like the PEBble in your SHOE that's been HOBbling
> your WALK,
> but you ARE in a HURry and SO can't STOP,
> like a SCRATCH on your BACK that YOU can't REACH,
> like the SMELL of old SMOKE on your FAVorite
> SWEATer,
> like FINGernails on a BLACKboard...
>                                         HE'S BACK!
>
now can we have it in anglo saxon alliterative verse (
with a bob at the end, of course ! )

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