Revised Unnamed Conlang

I thank you all for your help (and more thanks for those who helped more).

revised unnamed language.
concept: narration-based [all Implied First Person]

phoneme pronounciation:
gh
kh [X]
o  (like "cOt" & "Octopus")
u  (like "tUt & "bUnk") [U\] ?
I  [I] or [I\]
ii  (like "sIght" and "strIve")
a  (like "bAt" & "cAn")
b  [b]
d  [d]  (? [d'] or [d_<] ?)
dy [dz\]
n  [n] or [N\]
m  [m]
sy [s\]
zy [z\]
s  [s]
s'  [S]
h  [h] (?) [h\] or [H\] ?)

rules:
no double vowels.
no triple consanants.
'dy' can not be used to prefix or start a word; nor can 'sy' 'zy' or (_).
'gh' can not be used to suffix or end a word; nor can ('kh')* or (_).
suffixes can not be used as prefixes.
prefixes can not be used as suffixes.
* = I'm of two minds about that one.

vocabulary:

ghere = narrate, narration
ghore = he narrates [thusly]
ghure = she narrates [thusly]
ghoure = it was relayed [to me] that it was narrated [thusly]
*for the ending of a narration, replace GH with KH;
khore = [and so] he narrated

s'aih = you
s'aoh = they
s'aeh = other

sobe = to
sabe = from
sebe = with
sibe = by
siibe = of

throw = ghekh
hit = ghedh
kick = ghadh
butting = ghakh

but = dusu
and = sudu
as well (as) = susudu
and then = sudusudu
so, therefore = dususu
because = susu
however = dusudu

dyen = man
dyon = woman
dyiin = anon.
dyiinaum = unknown
(so...what function does the -aum serve?  how does it go from Anonymous ->
Unknown ?).
dyaen = person, people [abstract concept]


postfixes:
past tense:
-(a)zye
-(a)sye
ie, "dyenazye" = "man got"

present tense:
-(a)zy = recipient
-(a)sy = bestower
-aum = (?)
ie, "dyenasy" = "man is given"

future tense:
-(a)zya = recipient
-(a)sya = bestower
ie, "dyenasya" = "man will get"