Re: Announcement: Andreas's Conlanging Pages

En réponse à Andreas Johansson <and_yo@...>:

>
> Comments and critiques are of course welcome. (It's easiest if you send
> 'em
> on-list, since the spam protection on this account is really hungry, but
> if
> you really think it's OT, send it to my recently acquired extra
> address
> "andjo at free dot fr" - I'll check it now and then at least.)
>
Well, your page looks good so far :)) . Just two minor critiques:
- The page on Yargish is unreadable. The lines extend well over the width of
the screen, and make it a pain to read (scrolling up and down is quite easy,
scrolling left and right is really awful :(( ). You should try to cut the lines
are put the page in minimal HTML (I think there's a tag <PRE></PRE> to put back
things in monospace fonts, so that you won't have to make actual tables right
away :)) ).
- I remarked on the page about Tairezazh that you consistently use -ices as a
plural of -ix in "affices", "suffices", "prefices", etc... Now it's a use I've
never seen in English. I think the correct forms should
be "affixes", "suffixes", "prefixes" simply :)) . I just remark that because I
first read "suffices" as a verb, and it took me a while to realise why the
setence made no sense ;)) ...

> If you like the thing, save some gratitude for Christophe, who first
> convinced me to make a web presentation, and then help me find webspace
> at
> free.fr.
>
Hehe, it's completely unnecessary :) . I'm glad I could help already :) .

Christophe.

http://rainbow.conlang.free.fr

Take your life as a movie: do not let anybody else play the leading role.

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