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Re: Simple translation exercise?

From:Mark J. Reed <markjreed@...>
Date:Saturday, June 21, 2003, 22:52
I decided to give the new, improved Okaikiar a whirl, and
immediately ran into trouble. :)

On Sat, Jun 21, 2003 at 08:15:12PM +0100, Ian Spackman wrote:
>The cow jumped over the moon. >The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.
These sentences are a surprisingly interesting test of the language's relational expressivity. I can easily say that a cow did some jumping that took place above the moon, or that it jumped and thereby wound up over the moon. And, not that it's relevent to this sentence, I can also say that the cow started out over the moon and jumped such that it was no longer there. But to express that the cow jumped THROUGH the space over the moon, both starting and ending up elsewhere, that's harder. In this specific case I can cheat, since the verb "to jump" is transitive in Okaikiar and indicates that the direct object has been jumped over; I can just say "The cow jumped the moon" and "The quick brown fox jumps the lazy dog" (without the double-entendre of the English). It seems that the idea of "passing through" is an attribute of the combination of verb-of-motion + "over" in English: "crossing over", "jumping over", "running over", etc. Without a verb of motion, "over" is pretty much a synonym for "above". I need to figure out how to express this idea in Okaikiar. But for now, on to my cheating translations: Mymzar niald ermoiz. ['mYmzA`r nI'j&ld E`r'moIz] The cow (had) jumped (over) the moon. mymzar cow nial moon (niald: accusative singular) erman to jump [over] (ermoiz: [had] jumped [over]) Alko kondim modim g'rald mulzim ermom. ['&lko 'kondIm 'modIm g@'r&ld 'mUlzIm 'E`rmom] The quick brown fox jumps (over) the lazy dog. alko fox kondan to be fast (kondim: attributive) modan to be brown (modim: attributive) g'ral dog (g'rald: accusative) mulzan to be lazy (mulzim: attributive) erman to jump (ermom: jumps) -Mark

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