In a message dated Sat, 13 Jul 2002 09:48:22 +1000, kesuari@YAHOO.COM.AU writes:
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> On Sat, 2002-07-13 at 16:20, Joe wrote:
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> > Our Father in Heaven
> > May your name be called holy
> > May your Kingdom come
> > May your will be done
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> Too stilted for me.
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> May your name be called holy,
> Your Kingdom come,
> (And) your will be done
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> Is better, IMHO
yes, good.
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> > On Earth as it is in heaven
> > Give us today our daily bread
> > And forgive us our sins
> > As we forgive those who sin against us
> > Lead us not into temptation,
Don't lead us into temptation (?)
(I find _lead us not_ a bit odd, at least if you're trying to modernize it)
> > But deliver us from evil
> > For ever and ever, Amen
> >
> > Modern Version.
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> Tristan.
Elliott Lash