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Re: tiny poem

From:Nokta Kanto <red5_2@...>
Date:Thursday, August 7, 2003, 3:10
On Tue, 5 Aug 2003 15:49:20 -0400, lblissett <blissett@...> wrote:

>suikchelek >jelpach isippu >iavush. >pravadadut isasselkehij, >hakake sh su. >sagehmm ochee, >gah owk isugru. >pravadagmm wurri hah, >suikchelek.
I like the long-short rhythm, and, knowing nothing of your language, each line seems to have an intonation that ascends in the first half and falls in the last half. The circularness of starting and ending with the same word gives poems a feeling of timelessness IMO. (There's another poem like that