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Re: CHAT: Relays, Link 1

From:Yoon Ha Lee <yl112@...>
Date:Monday, August 20, 2001, 7:31
On Sunday, August 19, 2001, at 11:53 PM, Shreyas Sampat wrote:

> The first Texts: > > Nur Saraxasûh >
[snip]
> Nur Spoke > > Long ago, I was alone with the Chaos. > The noise of the Chaos pained my heart, and so I took refuge in the > Silence. > The Silence pained me too, and so I created the world. > Among the people of this world, I finally found my rightful place; > Where they worshipped me, > And named me their god. >
So *that's* what the original was! <squirm> Okay, I *so* reinterpreted what I got it's not even funny, even if it does move toward this (unintentionally)....<G> Is the following the 2nd text? It seemed to be a new one but there wasn't a--boundary marked, so I missed it at first.
> There were many children in the room; > Their noisy fun [can be heard] from the room; > [Causing] the woman to go into the room. > [She] said: >
[snip] Wow, what a neat transition! :-) <thinking of rowdy middle school kids> All I can say now is, I wish I knew how to work toward the kind of richness and complexity I've seen in these first two texts...maybe in a decade or so. <G> YHL

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