Re: Critique needed for lessons

Hi taliesin,

On Tue, 23 May 2006, taliesin the storyteller wrote:
>
> I've started making lessons for Taruven, there is one up so far at
>
>     http://taliesin.nvg.org/taruven/lessons/1.html
>
> Is it too much to learn at once? Too little? Too tricky? Too easy? Fun?
> Boring? Should it be possible to look up the answers somewhere?
No, it's a good start:
 - Neither too much nor too little
 - Neither too easy or tricky
 - fun, not boring

Good idea to have the answers available if anyone
wants them.

Other comments:
 - references to Example 5 etc are confusing, since
you don't have a number 5 on the relevant examples!
 - If "it is important to know when to use an optional
feature, and when not to" ... is it really optional?  For
if using or omitting it is a mistake, surely it is required?
 - Some readers will be stymied bby not knowing how
to pronounce your non-Latin characters.
 - If you can only choose one adjectival suffix, is it
possible to say (or paraphrase) "the good wild dog"?

Thanks for the virtual tour!

Regards,
Yahya

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