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Re: Critique needed for lessons

From:Yahya Abdal-Aziz <yahya@...>
Date:Wednesday, May 24, 2006, 8:11
Hi taliesin,

On Tue, 23 May 2006, taliesin the storyteller wrote:
> > I've started making lessons for Taruven, there is one up so far at > > http://taliesin.nvg.org/taruven/lessons/1.html > > Is it too much to learn at once? Too little? Too tricky? Too easy? Fun? > Boring? Should it be possible to look up the answers somewhere?
No, it's a good start: - Neither too much nor too little - Neither too easy or tricky - fun, not boring Good idea to have the answers available if anyone wants them. Other comments: - references to Example 5 etc are confusing, since you don't have a number 5 on the relevant examples! - If "it is important to know when to use an optional feature, and when not to" ... is it really optional? For if using or omitting it is a mistake, surely it is required? - Some readers will be stymied bby not knowing how to pronounce your non-Latin characters. - If you can only choose one adjectival suffix, is it possible to say (or paraphrase) "the good wild dog"? Thanks for the virtual tour! Regards, Yahya -- No virus found in this outgoing message. Checked by AVG Free Edition. Version: 7.1.394 / Virus Database: 268.7.0/345 - Release Date: 22/5/06

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Jim Henry <jimhenry1973@...>