Re: Critique needed for lessons

--- taliesin the storyteller
<taliesin-conlang@...> wrote:

> I've started making lessons for Taruven, there is
> one up so far at
>
>     http://taliesin.nvg.org/taruven/lessons/1.html
>
> Is it too much to learn at once? Too little? Too
> tricky? Too easy? Fun?
> Boring? Should it be possible to look up the answers
> somewhere?
>
A couple of technical details:

The page says: "Example 5 above" but I cannot find any
example numbered "5". It's clear which one should be
numbered five, but...

Same problem with "If you look closer at 5b and 5c". I
see a, b, c, ets, but again, no "5" explicitly stated.

The content of the lesson seems perfectly clear. Not
too fats or too slow, IMHO.

--gary

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