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Re: Critique needed for lessons

From:Herman Miller <hmiller@...>
Date:Wednesday, May 24, 2006, 3:17
taliesin the storyteller wrote:
> I've started making lessons for Taruven, there is one up so far at > > http://taliesin.nvg.org/taruven/lessons/1.html > > Is it too much to learn at once? Too little? Too tricky? Too easy? Fun? > Boring? Should it be possible to look up the answers somewhere?
Looks pretty good as far as the contents. I don't especially care for the look of the fixed-space font for the English glosses, but there aren't many alternatives if you want to distinguish that from the bold and italic text.... I'd like to see more of the derivational morphology that you hint at, but you could do that with a link to another page. I think you can safely assume that anyone interested in a conlang's grammar knows what subjects and objects in English are. But here you're contrasting the English usage with Taruven usage, so that's fine.

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