Re : Swlos Web Page

Dans un courrier dat=E9 du 20/10/99 20:53:16  , Ishma=EBl a =E9crit :

> At long last I have a web page up for my conculture, the Swlos, and their
>  language, Jitihk Zohse'n-don.  I would very much appreciate any comments.
> =20
>  The URL is http://members.tripod.com/~ENaeher/constuff/swlos.html
> =20
>  Right now there are a few snippets of the culture, a brief (and very
>  basic) overview of the language, and the first in what will (hopefully) b=
e
>  a series of language lessons.  There's more to come, but I think this is=20=
a
>  good introduction.
> =20
>  Thanks!
> =20
a very pleasant page, i must say.
trivial remark : white font on black back : i like it but maybe other reader=
s=20
won't.
plus you cannot be 15 and work out a like page that's indecent.

language : a good start.
interesting script.
but i think your grammar is still thin.
SOV with transitive S=B2V and intransitive O=B2V - or is it the reverse ?
and why not SVV and OVV or simply default pronouns ? - is quite difficult
to implement in natural langs, like in any lang using "gap filling"
without using pro-stuff. english does fine with very little weaponry though.
and jap too although "case tags" help.
so i'm curious to see further development.

computer stuff : yes. well i guess it's computer stuff because i could not=20
read
one full line of it. (i should put some very ennoying legal stuff on my page=
=20
about,
say, french porcine breading sanitary regulations, that would make it too.)

conculture : another kingdom with savage yet wise and obedient subjects ;-)
no cannibals ? novel inception ?

poetry : good. at least from a french viewpoint (i understand 'cavern' bette=
r=20
than
'cave' and anyway poetry is no good or bad, it's what you're compelled to le=
t
steam out from time to time).

courtney's page : this clogged up my computer, i had to re-start it.
no bug i hope.

i'll add your page to my conlangers' page tomorrow of course - not that it
will change your current inbrowsing flux.

mathias