Conlang introduction

I have started to create kimi iva sese, an isolating conlang. It produces
it's lexicon from malayian and english, using a simple formula. My source
of malayian words is http://pgoh.free.fr/dico.php . Here's the longest
sentence I have produced so far:

u ty viwo hige, la i poki kawe cice, e dana a miwo, o hide zine, ta dana
kawe dana o hido sobo ti?

[question indicator] [question variable] tell you, [that-clause
identifier] [if-clause identifier] man love woman, [relative indicator]
she [adjective indicator] beautiful, [adverb indicator] year for, [if-
clause end identifier] he love she [adverb indicator] ever for [that-
clause end identifier]?

Who told you that, if a man loves a beautiful woman for a year, he (will)
love(s) here for ever.

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