Re: Gold Sword and Red Crystal the Text for translators
From: | Jeff Sheets <wickedbob@...> |
Date: | Wednesday, August 2, 2000, 4:54 |
In a message dated 8/1/00 21:22:47 PM Central Daylight Time, romilly@EGL.NET
writes:
> Jeff Sheets wrote:
> Roger, I was wondering if pack
> >animals are unheard of in Kash? If they are present, the horse Red-Moon
> >could be included in that way.
>
> Believe me, I thought about this. There are small-elephant size, slow and
> very dumb beasts that were tried in ancient times. You needed several
> herders/drovers to keep just one headed in the right direction, and if they
> spotted a pool or mudhole, that was the end of that. In the deep country,
if
> you can't afford a tractor, by default they're still used for plowing.
> There are several quite large lizard species that on occasion have been
used
> to pull wagons, but they too are undependable and very nasty-tempered. An
> army might have used a herd of the various food animals, who might carry
> packs (unwillingly), but as they got eaten, someone would have to carry the
> packs..... HOWEVER, on due consideration, a mythical Hero like Gold-Sword
> might well have a companion _cousin_ (pratisha, the leopard-like wild
> relatives of the Kash with whom they can communicate telepathically), but
he
> would be just that, a companion. He might provide defense, and could
rustle
> up game for dinner; but you wouldn't expect him to carry a load. As a
matter
> of fact, at the end of my version, Gold Sword goes to both the local
> shepherd and cousins, who agree to provide food for the Dragon.
> On balance, I feel an ancient Kash warrior would have prided himself on
> being alone and self-sufficient.
I'd hate to try to herd anything so obstinate as the first animal. Red-Moon
would definitely represent a trustworthy and dependable companion, but would
not have assisted in anything but carrying a small amount of equipment, and
assisting in speed of travel, so the _cousin_ would not quite be appropriate.
I will keep your translation as is. Also, please send me the interlinear, I
am always interested in how other conlangs are formed.
Jeff Sheets
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