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Re: Gold Sword and Red Crystal the Text for translators

From:Jeff Sheets <wickedbob@...>
Date:Wednesday, August 2, 2000, 4:54
In a message dated 8/1/00 21:22:47 PM Central Daylight Time, romilly@EGL.NET
writes:

> Jeff Sheets wrote: > Roger, I was wondering if pack > >animals are unheard of in Kash? If they are present, the horse Red-Moon > >could be included in that way. > > Believe me, I thought about this. There are small-elephant size, slow and > very dumb beasts that were tried in ancient times. You needed several > herders/drovers to keep just one headed in the right direction, and if they > spotted a pool or mudhole, that was the end of that. In the deep country,
if
> you can't afford a tractor, by default they're still used for plowing. > There are several quite large lizard species that on occasion have been
used
> to pull wagons, but they too are undependable and very nasty-tempered. An > army might have used a herd of the various food animals, who might carry > packs (unwillingly), but as they got eaten, someone would have to carry the > packs..... HOWEVER, on due consideration, a mythical Hero like Gold-Sword > might well have a companion _cousin_ (pratisha, the leopard-like wild > relatives of the Kash with whom they can communicate telepathically), but
he
> would be just that, a companion. He might provide defense, and could
rustle
> up game for dinner; but you wouldn't expect him to carry a load. As a
matter
> of fact, at the end of my version, Gold Sword goes to both the local > shepherd and cousins, who agree to provide food for the Dragon. > On balance, I feel an ancient Kash warrior would have prided himself on > being alone and self-sufficient.
I'd hate to try to herd anything so obstinate as the first animal. Red-Moon would definitely represent a trustworthy and dependable companion, but would not have assisted in anything but carrying a small amount of equipment, and assisting in speed of travel, so the _cousin_ would not quite be appropriate. I will keep your translation as is. Also, please send me the interlinear, I am always interested in how other conlangs are formed. Jeff Sheets "On two occasions I have been asked by members of Parliament, `Pray, Mr. Babbage, if you put into the machine wrong figures, will the right answers come out?' I am not able rightly to apprehend the kind of confusion of ideas that could provoke such a question." -- Charles Babbage