translation exercise: the serenity prayer

Am 07/29 23:46  J Y S Czhang yscrifef:

>     TRANSLATION EXERCISES:
>
>     1> Translate the Serenity Prayer into your conlang(s) (native idiomatic
> forms and/or personal re-interpretation highly encouraged!):
>
>     God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change,
>     The courage to change the things I can,
>     And the wisdom to know the difference.
>
Hmmm, I never got around to posting the translation of this one:

Ddew, dunmui lla seruindad a afar llo chos k'eo mhod rhen di fydar,
Ill briw a fydar llo chos k'eo bod,
E'll doethfent a choenescer lla ddiffereint.

Ddew, dunmui lla seruindad a afar llo chos k'eo mhod rhen di fydar,
god.vocative give.2.sg-1.sg.disjunctive the.f serenity to receive.inf
the.p thing.p REL-1.sg.nom neg.be_able.pres.sg NEG of change.inf

Ill briw a fydar llo chos k'eo bod,
the.m courage to change.inf the.p thing.p REL-1.sg.nom be_able.pres.sg

E'll doethfent a choenescer lla ddiffereint.
And_the.m wisdom to know.inf the.f difference

- andrew.
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