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Re: preferred voices?

From:Marcus Smith <smithma@...>
Date:Saturday, September 23, 2000, 20:10
Yoon Ha Lee wrote:

>In English the reason I've often seen (and the reason I avoid it much of >the time) is that the passive often obscures responsibility. For >example, a company might say something like: "Two employees have been >killed and the matter is under investigation"; there are a lot of ways to >use the passive voice to misdirect the reader/listener. (Probably a book >on rhetoric or style could give real-life examples.) Which isn't to say >that the passive voice isn't useful and even preferred in other >constructions, e.g. when you don't *know* who/what was responsible, or in >other stylistic situations. I used to turn semantic somersaults avoiding >the passive before I came to the latter realization.
There is another use for passives, which isn't so important in English. In a conversation or paper, passives allow you to keep the subject the same across sentences, adding coherence to what is being said. Japanese uses passives for this quite a bit.
>Another reason you might not see it, at least as far as college writing >classes are concerned :-/ is that some professors will actively dock >points for *any* passive construction even when it is stylistically and >grammatically justified, which I feel is stupid, but as a writing tutor I >have no control over what the professors do.
Linguistics professors don't mind passives. They are very open minded about stylistics, I find. Which is good, because I've always been one to let my sense of style guide my writing, ignoring whatever I may have been told by English prof's. =============================== Marcus Smith AIM: Anaakoot "When you lose a language, it's like dropping a bomb on a museum." -- Kenneth Hale ===============================