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Re: My masterpiece, part 2 (long)

From:Pavel Iosad <pavel_iosad@...>
Date:Monday, February 18, 2002, 22:55
> This is the English translation of the Yivríndil text I posted in my > previous message. Again, I'm not expecting detailed comments, but I'd > like to know if anyone at least read it.
Wow!!! I kneel! This is great! Absolutely outstanding! And the language is nice-sounding (a distant similarity, in my mind, to Quenya, is not a flaw... :-)) Good play on archetypes in the content too... I guess this is naturalistic enough piece. I liked the spitting part though - such an unusual way to breathe life into one's creatures... Thanks for sharing this, and hoping for a continuation, and more on grammar too, Pavel