Re: My masterpiece, part 2 (long)

Hello,
> This is the English translation of the Yivríndil text I posted in my
> previous message.  Again, I'm not expecting detailed comments, but I'd
> like to know if anyone at least read it.
Wow!!! I kneel! This is great! Absolutely outstanding! And the language is
nice-sounding (a distant similarity, in my mind, to Quenya, is not a flaw...
:-))

Good play on archetypes in the content too... I guess this is naturalistic
enough piece. I liked the spitting part though - such an unusual way to
breathe life into one's creatures...

Thanks for sharing this, and hoping for a continuation, and more on grammar
too,
Pavel