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Re: My masterpiece, part 1 (long)

From:Padraic Brown <agricola@...>
Date:Thursday, February 21, 2002, 12:19
Am 18.02.02, Jesse Bangs yscrifef:

> I'd like to know if anyone else has a conlang text of comparable length > or ambition, and how they made it.
That would be "La Adventura la Guimier" in formal Kerno at a shade over 3600 words. It was written in large part the same way you did this. I maded a skelleton text in English and made the K version from that.
> Of course the text below won't be > really intelligible to anyone, but I welcome general comments on the > aesthetics or nature of the peice. Thanks
Well, I like the sound of the first word (boraon), so you're off to a good start! On the whole, it seems to have a sonorous, flowing quality. Good job on the long text! That's a hard work to do at all, to say nothing of doing it well. Padraic. -- Gwerez dah, chee gwaz vaz, ha leal.