Re: Relay Interleaved in English

Paul Bennett <Paul.Bennett@...> wrote:
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> Here are the texts of the poem -- as translated into english by the =
person
> who translated into the language in question -- interleaved on a
> line-by-line basis
    Here is line 2 (counting the title as 1) in Irina's English from =
Valdyan
and my English from Gladilatian from Valdyan.

> They hear the wind give good health
> She hears the good wind give health.
    The switch from "they" to "she" was an error on my part, but I don't
understand the movement of "good".  In her notes to me Irina wrote:

: Modifiers follow the head (_rach dolys_ "a/the good wind")

so I translated "rach dolys" as "vra hsmona", which is (assuming "vra" =
gets
translated as "good") "good wind".

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             Dennis Paul Himes    <>    dennis@himes.connix.com
             homepage: http://www.connix.com/~dennis/dennis.htm
        Gladilatian page: http://www.connix.com/~dennis/glad/lang.htm
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Disclaimer: "True, I talk of dreams; which are the children of an idle
brain, begot of nothing but vain fantasy; which is as thin of substance =
as
the air."                      - Romeo & Juliet, Act I Scene iv Verse =
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