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Re: CHAT: Lord's Prayer

From:Barry Garcia <barry_garcia@...>
Date:Friday, November 12, 1999, 8:05
blahedo@brown.edu writes:
>Funny how much of a reflection this whole thing is on 20th century >America. Every change I seriously object to is a reflection of some >undesirable modern trait: hubris, legalism, and moral devolution (let >someone else take the moral responsibility: *save* me, not "lead me >not"). Blee-agh. > >And they totally screwed up the rhythm of the thing, too.
The version Nik posted just does not have the same feeling to it at all. I think whoever made this "updated" version did not understand what the meanings of the words really were (or thought they sounded more contemporary and would be more understandable, but couldn't find better substitutes). Anyway, I agree the rhythm is messed as well! _-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- 'The beginning calls for courage; the end demands care'