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Re: CHAT: Ave Maria

From:Danny Wier <dawier@...>
Date:Monday, June 26, 2000, 20:56
>From: Dan Jones <yl-ruil@...>
>One of Carasta's religions is Christianity of an early Catholic kind. I was >trying to think of a way to present a short sample from each of the >Carastan >languages, and I came up with this, a translation of Ave Maria.
Neato; the main Techian religion is Christianity of an early Orthodox (so-called Monophysite, not Eastern or "Greek") kind. Among "Creolized" Techans, however, Catholics make up the largest religious community. (For some reason, the term "Techian" is used for a non-Westernized person; "Techan" for a Westernized or "Creolized" individual. Many find the latter moniker somewhat derogatory.)
>Original Latin: >Ave Maria, gratia plene, dominus tecum, benedicta tu in mulieribus, et >benedictus frucus ventris tui Iesus. Sancta Maria, pro nobis peccatoribus >nunc et in hora mortis nostrae, amen.
The last line should be: Santa Maria, Mater Dei, ora pro nobis peccatoribus... It's a prayer of Latin/Western origin; Orthodoxy has no equivalent, at least in the way of a short and repeatable Marian prayer. (But the Akathistos to the Virgin is a great hymn/prayer -- I think it has twelve parts, and is begun and ended with various _kontakia_ and doxologies. It is an integral part of St. Basil's liturgy, which is standard among Copts.) Now on to what Tech might have. Unfortunately, I have no idea what most of the words or hardly any of the grammar and syntax is going to be like. A Tech-nical analysis would be something like... peace thou-DAT Mary-VOC, complete favor-LOC, the Lord-NOM with thou-INS! blessed-FEM-ABS thou-NOM among woman-GrPL-LOC, and blessed-MASC-ABS the fruit-NOM womb-GEN-thy, Jesus-NOM. Mary-VOC the holy-VOC, mother-VOC God-DAT, pray-IMP-2SG+1plInc=LOC sinner-GrtPL-LOC, now-ADV the hour-and-LOC death-GEN-our(GrPlInc). Amen. Most likely, the first two words would be: _sla:Mx ?@ Mary@M_ (M = labiodental nasal). Vocative is usually marked only by lenition of the initial consonant, or a t- prefix with initial fricatives/laryngeals, and no suffix. The particle ?@ is optional, but recommended for formal use such as this. The only other words I can think of are _mary@M ?@ X'Do:sA: ?amA: t-@l~A:h_ (X' = uvular ejective fricative, l~ = velar(ized) lateral; last two words are not lenited because they are written "amma t-Allah", with doubled/fortis consonants), for "Holy Mary, Mother of God". As one can see, consonant phonology can get quite ugly. Daniel A. Wier ¶¦¬þ Lufkin, Texas USA http://communities.msn.com/DannysDoubleWideontheWeb ________________________________________________________________________ Get Your Private, Free E-mail from MSN Hotmail at http://www.hotmail.com